Tuesday, 23 May 2017

how is my speech?

I want to improve changing the sound of my voice.  I was proud  myself because I was speaking clearly and loudly and I didn't rush my reading.

Thursday, 18 May 2017

Hwo likes reading?

Maggie book review.This is my book I have been reading.Image result for maggie the kiwi dogTitle of the book:Maggie the kiwi dog.
I read a book called Maggie
the kiwi dog.
the author is Sue Gibbison. This book is a Article.

This article is about Maggie the kiwi dog.

Maggie the strong eye huntaway cross is a certified kiwi dog. Ever since she was a pup,Maggie’s been trained by her owner, Steve,to find kiwi. Steve works for the Department of Conservation,and Maggie is one several
Kiwi dogs in the bank of New Zealand saved.

This is my book I have been reading.

People who likes saving kiwis will enjoy this book.

Who likes Te Reo Maori? I do.

I been learning to build my vocabulary
In Te Reo Maori.

Monday, 15 May 2017

Who wants to learn about 2d and 3d shapes well you came to the write blog.

W.A.L.T describe 2D and 3D shapes using words such as edge, face and vertices.

Thursday, 11 May 2017

Here piggy piggy piggy!

This week in my writing WALT check that we have used correct structure for recount
To be successful we will:
  • Say who, when, where and what at the beginning of our recount
  • Use time words between events (Firstly, After that, next and finally
  • End with a reflection (my thoughts about the event)
      Pig Hunting with My Family
Begin Draft. My dad and Tman and Ammron and I  were going pig hunting up Gammons. On Sunday.
Finally we arrived at the big scary, spooky, terrifying bush my brother said.” . Suddenly   the dogs were running around looking for a wild boar a few minuts later I said I” can hear the dogs barking rof rof rof rof rof!.And the pigs squealing”. So my uncle Tman ran down and then I said” dad can I go stab the pig with him. He said sorry  the bush is too big he said next time you can go down to kill the pig. Ok I said.” You can carry the pig on you back go by Tman and get the pig!. Then he took photos of me. The pig of course it felt heavy and it looked so scary my dad said lets go its getting darker then black caves. I felt proud of myself. I thout this was the  best pig hunt I
have ever done.[The end]
 think I was successful because... checking my sentences to see if they make seance.
An area I need to get better at is ... having more time words in my story.