Wednesday, 12 April 2017

My pepeha

My learning goals for term 2.

Here are my goals I am trying to achieve for term 2.

Monday, 10 April 2017

I like protected beaches.

WALT use language features of persuasive writing
To be successful I will:
Use rhetorical questions to make my writing interesting
Use emotive language (words about feelings/emotions

Marine reserves are good.
I believe that marine reserves are good.One reason I think this is because fish can grow huge because   people  will not be allowed to fish there. That is tremendous! Added to that fish will not be caught by commercial fishermen. Commercial fishing is where they catch lots of fish it's a  fishing business this is good because fish could survive they could survive to grow big and have babies so there's going to be more fish in the sea.
How Magnificent is that?

My second reason  we  should have more marine reserves in New Zealand is so that our kaimoana will be   protected. My third reason why marine reserves are good because you can dive and do technology . for example people can go and explore the kina’s and pua’s   that are growing huge. Like I said marine reserves are a good idea.   I learnt how to say something and what it was and say what i like or didn't like what i found easy was I could make a good rhetorical questions are when you ask questions to the readers.

Persuasive writing. the thing i found hard was to gather ideas about marine reserves. 

Sunday, 9 April 2017

Do you know how to add big numbers well you came to the right blog?.

Here is my maths DLO I am confident using my place value strategies.  I enjoyed learning how to add and subtract big numbers My next step is to learn my 6 times tables. 

Tuesday, 4 April 2017


I am learning to write short and long sentences that makes sense.

Rubbish is everywhere.

I think all waste should not go to the dump. Also I think all rubbish should not be burnt  because you can reuse it to make stuff like hanging gardens and tree huts

Secondly don’t throw rubbish in the dump like,plastic bottles,and wood. Like i said you can reuse it all over again. My third reason is about recycling. I think recycling means taking rubbish to the kaikohe transfer station I hate taking my rubbish to the rubbish dump because it is disrespectful to Papatuanuku and some rubbish can be inflammable  like petrol bottles and lighters. In summary I think all waste should not go to the dump.

I think i was successful because I read my sentences and made sure they makes sense.